您可能在您的写作里有太多的长句子。
 
专家相信，句子的平均长度应该是在15 至 20 个字之间。这种长度可以让读者轻松地吸收您的句子内容。例如，下列的句子可能让人难以理解，因为它的长度太长：
 
My favorite place to visit is my grandparents' house near the lake where we love to fish and swim, and we often take the boat out on the lake.
 
把句子分成两个（或更多）句子可以使您的写作更清晰、更有意思:
 
My favorite place to visit is my grandparents' house near the lake. We love to fish and swim there, and we often take the boat out on the lake.
 
好的写作常常掺和长短不一的句子以更有效地沟通内容。您可以甚至在几个长句子之後尝试一个短句子（或只有一个字的句子）以帮助您强调您想表达的。例如，
 
Benjamin Franklin, who was one of America's "founding fathers," helped write the Declaration of Independence. He invented many things, such as bifocals and the Franklin stove, and he discovered electricity. Electricity. Where would we be without it?
 
在上面的例子中，文章段落是以长句子开头，而以短句子结尾。这种组合让整个段落更加活泼、有力。您可以跟以下的段落（仅有一个长句的段落）对比。
 
Benjamin Franklin, who was one of America's "founding fathers," helped write the Declaration of Independence. He invented many things, such as bifocals and the Franklin stove, and he discovered electricity, which became very important to modern life.
 
您比较喜欢哪一个段落?

总结:长短句子混合使用可以让您的写作更活泼。您可以跟您的指导教师讨论，是否您的长短句子的混合恰到好处。

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