论文写作中您可能使用太多短句

好的写作通常有包括不同长短的句子,藉以让文章读起来更有趣。太多短句让文章听起来结巴。您应该合併一些短句,让您的作品听起来较顺畅些。以下是一个有太多短句的段落的例子:
 
I knew my friends would throw me a party. It was for my birthday. There was something in the air. I felt it for a whole week before that. I was nervous. I was also very excited. I got home that night. My friends didn't disappoint me. I walked in my house. All my friends yelled, "Surprise!"
 
我们只要用相连句子的字就可以改进此段落。
 
Because it was my birthday, I knew my friends would throw me a party. There was something in the air for a whole week before that. I was nervous, but excited, when I got home that night. I wasn't disappointed. When I walked in my house, all my friends yelled, "Surprise!"

总结:好的写作通常有包括不同长短的句子,藉以让文章读起来更有趣。太多短句让文章听起来结巴。若需要知道如何合併句子,您可以请教您的指导教师如何改进您的写作。

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