您可能有用对等连接词开头的句子。
 
对等连接词是像and, but, so, or, yet, for, nor 等字。它们在句子中间把一些想法连接或组合起来。例如,
 
I love pizza, so I eat it for breakfast.
Mother drove to town to buy groceries, but she came home with a present for me.
 
对等连接词也可以用来开起一个句子，如以下的句子:
 
And I didn't like parties.
So I did not do well on that test.
 
当您有太多用对等连接词开头的句子时，您的写作变得不顺畅。欲把您的写作变得更顺畅，尽量仅在句子中间连结思绪时才使用对等连接词。
 
在以下的段落里有许多用对等连接词开头的句子：
 
Baseball is the great American sport. And, it is thought of as a summer pastime. So as soon as the weather turns warm, all the neighborhood kids find a field to toss a ball around. And soon they form teams and play each other. But all summer, they always find time to listen to pro games on the radio. And they watch them on TV.
 
我们只要删除这些对等连接词就能改进这个段落:
 
Baseball, the great American sport, is thought of as a summer pastime. As soon as the weather turns warm, the neighborhood kids find a field to toss a ball around. Soon, they form teams to play each other, but all summer, they always find time to listen to pro games on the radio and watch them on TV.